As If

As If

A Poem by Creepy Swine Guy
"

Okay, I gave it a title.

"

It’s been almost a week.

His belongings are dispersed,

His place cleared out,

 

Someone else lives there.

Occasional mail returned,

"No longer at this address."

 

It's as if ...

He was never here.

© 2010 Creepy Swine Guy


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How quickly we forget the forgettable.
I guess the answer is to live splendidly and wildly and to make a mark of some description somewhere on someone....lest we be forgotten.
A simple write which brings the importance of living to us so well.
Thanks greatly for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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The sense of loss is palpable. More words won't make that any clearer. What I like about this is the brevity and how much nearly strangled emotion you pack into it. But I always find myself drawn to that style of poetry. It's hard to write but has a spare beauty.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so many questions to be asked . . .

you make that point very well here

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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