Walk With Me

Walk With Me

A Poem by Creepy Swine Guy

 

Walk with me, on summer shores

where the water laps warmly at

our unprotected toes.

 

Walk with me, through green forests,

still dripping with the fragrance

of cleansing rains.

 

Sit with me, on the front porch

where the climbing sun burns the

morning fog from the valley.

 

Sit with me, on the back porch,

where the blaze orange sun

gently bids us good night.

 

Stay with me. Soothe me with your

soft, gentle words and calming

countenance. Love me.

 

 

© 2015 Creepy Swine Guy


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What? Lemme read this again....yup, Dani is right. Where did this soft, gentle soul emerge from? Ahhhh, what soothing words, what tender thoughts. The last line brings it all together. What'd I tell ya bout that love thang? Get's ya every time. Love is good. It's verra good, and you just expressed a wonderful, hidden desire for it. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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This is subtle and sweet. Very tender. Soothing to the mind, and nice to speak out loud.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was very good. it was somehow calming. i enjoyed the last verse the most, it was beautiful

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece is filled with longing, but it isnt rushed, or jaded, or bitter, its not longing in the hopeless sense, or longing in the desperate sense, its longing in a hopeful, happy, possitive sense. I like.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't really have anything to say to this. I think I'll just keep smiling, while I read it once more. Thank you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is good... it makes me feel like im there... like your talkin to me . it is well written

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful love poem, I'm so glad I read it. Thank you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You creat beautiful scenes with few words and that's what is great about this. I really enjoyed reading this, it was very peaceful. Brilliant!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very beautiful and moving. Excellent work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're not so creepy after all mr. swine. This is a beautifully written poem. It was simple, gentle, and romantice. You painted a vivid picture in my head by using descriptive words. This one is going in my favorites! :) toodles

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem draws you in and leads on the journey that can be traveled only by two.
Very nice. Cherrie

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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