Perseid.

Many thanks to my friend for the use of her word chisel.

 

A small note in last week's newspaper
drew me to this nocturnal madness.

My alarm clock no doubt wondering
what insanity had possessed me.

Not bothering to dress, I tossed a
jacket over my pajamas and I drove.

I drove to the highest point in our
tiny town where cars lined up by dozens
and multitudes of the similarly unhinged stood
in slack-jawed silence,
eyes lifted to the firmament.

No blaring horns, no ill words...
no words at all.
Just blankets, pajamas and quiet goodwill
as we watched the meteors,
awe struck
at the splendor of the heavens.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Willow B. Coldfeather]

Wow, I continue to love your poetry.
Especially because it relates to my love of space.
I'm going to watch the Perseid's meteor shower on August 11th, I saw it in my local newspaper too.

It will be my first attendance at a stargazing event and I hope it will be as brilliant as you describe it to be!

[Lydia Blackwell]

this is a lovely little piece. I love to watch the sky!

[Adora.xo]

Beautiful piece. I love the anticipation you created at the begining and through out, making the "splendor of the heavens," even more splendid. Simple, but it says alot! Good job love!

~Adora

[Ferg]

love this one......you captured the moment brilliantly

[Kat Plunkett]

this was really pretty :}

[holly]

This is really good, Gerry. This poem takes us with you to gathering of quietly "awe-struck" observers. Congratulations.

[Doreen]

Perfect imagery. You chose a wonderful way to paint it on the page.
I have yet to see this miraculous sight. :)

[Hannah Estar]

Fascinating! Somehow appreciation for the natural beauty of the universe has become a rarity... =) I can truly relate to this poem... A situation described exceedingly well.

[Emily B]

Sarah tried to stay up last night to see the show, but her father over-ruled her adventures. . . :)

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. now here is a writing that I can truly relate to.. this is a yearly ritual for me to watch.. I try to find the darkest place ... sit in a lounge chair with snacks and drink in hand for hours gazing.. will wish on one or two.. great night to catch a falling star!! Many young readers may not know of this event .. it's been viewed for 2000 years and in midevil times called the tears of St. Lawrence in Europe. It usually takes place between August the 8th and 14th.. I usually track it on the 11th or 12th.. whenever the sky is clear enough with no moon too bright or clouds to hinder it.. the more dark and secluded the viewing platform.. they more amazing this event truly is! Love your clip.. and have a real passion for this event! Thank you for sharing!!! =)