Closer

Closer

A Poem by Creepy Swine Guy



Death seems to stalk me now.
Or it is only now, that I have
crested the top of this big ride,
that I look over my shoulder and
see his head peeking around every
corner behind me. Names in
obituaries never used to have
my number next to them. Now,
the numbers are even smaller
than mine. I hear his footsteps
every day, and every day I stop
to listen ... and every day they
sound just a tiny bit closer.

© 2014 Creepy Swine Guy


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This is the price of getting older I suppose. My dad used to read those obits everyday and you are right death seems less abstract and more corporeal the older you get. We all know we can't outrun him but he creeps into our thoughts more often as we read those names and ages in the death notices.

Names in
obituaries never used to have
my number next to them. Now,
the numbers are even smaller
than mine. I hear his footsteps
every day, and every day I stop
to listen ... and every day they
sound just a tiny bit closer.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

Thank you for popping in. You always seem to pick right up on my vibe. I saw in the paper where a Ma.. read more



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The graphic goes well with the poem. Yeah, I can identify with this. I'm not old, but I'm not young anymore either. Nice poem. Very straight forward. I like that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

Thank you sir. I appreciate the visit and the kind words.
This is the price of getting older I suppose. My dad used to read those obits everyday and you are right death seems less abstract and more corporeal the older you get. We all know we can't outrun him but he creeps into our thoughts more often as we read those names and ages in the death notices.

Names in
obituaries never used to have
my number next to them. Now,
the numbers are even smaller
than mine. I hear his footsteps
every day, and every day I stop
to listen ... and every day they
sound just a tiny bit closer.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

Thank you for popping in. You always seem to pick right up on my vibe. I saw in the paper where a Ma.. read more

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Added on October 15, 2013
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