Worthy

Worthy

A Poem by Creepy Swine Guy
"

To the people who read my words. In no particular order, Misty, Emily, La Lorena, Myth, Phibby, Betsy, Emily, JennieWren, Rebecca, Jennifer Rose ... Oh I KNOW I'm missing names, I still appreciate you

"


My words are chiseled so often with
you in mind. Not always about you,
but always with the knowledge that you
will read them.

You whose eyes read and feel the
words so perfectly ... who feel the
words like one feels the radiant
sunshine of May, after a long, cold
winter of longing.

You, who read, and properly feel the
stinging
bite of the bitter, wind
driven snows.


You, who read, and know the searing sting
of the
whetted blade that opens a vein.

I owe you. I owe it to you, not to throw
some haphazard assembly of words
clumsily onto a page, and grunt, "Poem".

And so, you are on my mind as I move
the words about, chip away at them,
dust them off, look one last time at them
 ... and finally decide that they might be
worthy of your eyes.

© 2013 Creepy Swine Guy


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I agree with Emily. Was thinking something similar. This one really got me, with the stone and the chiseling line, the poet to poet understanding, how we feel deeply, so eloquently described.
"know the searing sting
of the whetted blade that opens a vein."
I so envy that line. This is definitely one of my all time favorites!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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you used to be a man who worked at writing poems

now you are the Poet

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Emily B

11 Years Ago

did i not introduce you to my good friend Emily Dickinson, you also are aware of my daughter Sarah E.. read more
Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

... and so, the crowd of Emilys arrived.
Emily B

11 Years Ago

:)
Beautiful Monroe! Love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Creepy Swine Guy

11 Years Ago

Thank you ma'am

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