She's a strange girl with an eternal memory, perhaps, the only one worthy of absolute trust. Some call her a b***h, but I defend her to the death. Her job is to balance the books, which she does with brutal efficiency.
We trust her to serve up a heaping helping of that divine dish that is oh so sweet when served cold.
I so want to just leave you a smiley face, but I won't. This is an excellent creepy voice with another stuck landing. I think your next book of poetry should have lady justice, the blindfolded women with the scales(you know) in shadow looming there, with creepy green and black. I'm probably stealing that from a Grisham novel aren't I?...but still. Loved the description of Karma as a bitchy woman and the rest. Very nice!
I so want to just leave you a smiley face, but I won't. This is an excellent creepy voice with another stuck landing. I think your next book of poetry should have lady justice, the blindfolded women with the scales(you know) in shadow looming there, with creepy green and black. I'm probably stealing that from a Grisham novel aren't I?...but still. Loved the description of Karma as a bitchy woman and the rest. Very nice!
The Ten Commandments of the Writer's Cafe (King Swine Version).
1. Thou shalt not plagiarize.
2. Thou shalt not treat badly any writer based on their age, social status, ability or creative view.. more..