It's Non-Refundable.

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Skin pale white,circles under your perfect eyes, your body's rock hard, your all that makes me happy. It's so hard to be without you. is it enough to give you my heart? But please when I do, be carefull, its fragile easily breakable, and non-replacable. Please don't reaturn it, it's non refundable. Yours to keep, as long as you want. When your done, put it somewhere safe. Where it can't be dammaged, because thats not what I need. Possibly close to you, somewhere where you think its safe. But please don't return it, and don't take it unless your sure you can keep it in mint-condition. Please don't make any promises unless your willing to keep it. Are you ready for it? No, please don't say yes untill you see it, you may change your mind. But please, don't touch it unless you want it. Here it is, no it's non-refundable. No, are you sure? WAIT! Don't touch. Are you sure? It's gone, out of my hands out of my reach, you have it, you took it without paying. NO! stop its fragile! I need three words in return. Flushed, stable in place, shocked. Thank you, but remember It's Non-Refundable.

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[Aludra]

That was so creative.

''is it enough to give you my heart? But please when I do, be carefull, its fragile easily breakable, and non-replacable. Please don't reaturn it, it's non refundable.''

I came across your poem through Justyna.
I was just telling her I never thought of the heart in that sense before. It's something new.
I'm glad you joined WritersCafe. x3.

[Last Lying Look]

This is neat.
Cool man.
Good work.
-E.M.R