Circles and Cycles

As with most of my writings I feel that this is incomplete. Sadly, my personality is such that i'm far more likely to start something new than to finish what I started.

Look at the stars, let's think while we spin

We can reach out to touch the place where we begin

Though they're so far away

They tell us to lay here and sway 

In the grass with the night wearing thin

As the moon slows it's glow,the birds chirp and complain

The dark summer sky starts to die and then fade

But even in the bright dawn

My head lingers on

The bright light in your eyes shining out from the shade

Reviews

[Farmgirl]

Ugh you are such a romantic lol
I'm a sucker for writes like these
Unfinished or not this is beautiful and shows a lot about your soul