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A Poem by
Kitty Pow Pow
Please don't lock me up
I promise I'll be good
I promise I'll behave
Though I've been bad
Knocked down your glass
It wasn't on purpose
I promise I'll help
Just please no
Not the cage
It's dark and scary
Just please no
Not the cage
Daddy, I promise
I'll be good
I swear.
© 2014 Kitty Pow Pow
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luvs2write
I read this all in one breath...very chilling. I like the fact that there isn't much punctuation in the poem, it makes the child seem more desperate and fearful. You made me feel a million things with just a few words...nice work. Keep writing!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
I read this all in one breath...very chilling. I like the fact that there isn't much punctuation in the poem, it makes the child seem more desperate and fearful. You made me feel a million things with just a few words...nice work. Keep writing!!
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9 Years Ago
Thank youu! :)
❀Subaru_Nyaa!..
That is a really bad parenting.I felt scared or feel sad for the kid.This one is good too!
Posted 10 Years Ago
That is a really bad parenting.I felt scared or feel sad for the kid.This one is good too!
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Added on June 21, 2014
Last Updated on June 21, 2014
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