The Night You Left.

Nights spent alone,

With nothing but myself

The constant sound of cars

Brings memories of you

The night you left this world

Drenched in rusted blood

Curled up on the road

You groan with lost love

As your groans start to fade

You find a sudden urge

To stand once more

And enter the bright light

This was your last night

 

Reviews

[Kitty Pow Pow]

Changed! ^^ Thank you for the advice ^^

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!❀]

It's okay,no problem

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
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I love this one too but the "Sour Blood" part makes more sense if you put the taste of rust or Iron because blood taste like rust due to the iron in the blood.Anyway,I am rambling,It's your choice to change it or not.I love however way you put it