Do Me A Favor?

First clo-lab poem I've done. This was written between me and an ex-gf ofmine.

So let me get this straight...you want to call it all off?
You want to let what we have go?
Okay, but do me one last thing,
Don't look my way on the street cause I'll be with another man,
Don't call my number cause I won't listen to your lies again,
Don't come to my door when the rain is pouring down,
Cause I'll have got rid of my clouds,
You brought me down but I stayed true,
When all my friends said I should find someone better than you,
There were times I will admit,
That I gave you reasons to quit,
But now you wanna pull this s**t? Fine, I can play that way.




You're screaming at me like a wildwoman in a padded room,
Saying how could you kill off a flower before it could bloom,
Baby I know you can't see to good but what we have I think is agreed,
Our love ain't a rose but an invasive weed,
You've stood by me when I was a mess,
And I've put you through some things...I guess,
But you were the one who came crawling back on your knees,
Mascara line on your cheeks saying, "baby please!"
So do me a favor,
And cut the crap...we know this end will be our savior,
So get your things and go scream in the rain,
I've got to wound a broken heart again

Author's Note

First stanzas done by Cassy Turner, stanzas after gap are mine

Reviews

[The Twin Arenas]

so like, she wrote the first one, and you wrote the second one, and then you guys weren't friends? like, after the poem was done?

[Lady Decaf]

I sent her my stanza via facebook and she sent me her reply. We're civil now.

[larryb]

Good job of venting ....we are not professional writers here and i think you should have received a few reviews on this ...kudos for having the balls to get this off your chest.