Tuesday Morining

*read title* at my college. It's suppose to be bad weather this/that day. It's a short little poem that took me about five minutes to write.

Sun clouds give way to rain clouds,

What news will they bring?

Will they bring relief?

Or will they bring sorrow?

When they leave,

Will the rain grow flowers?

Or will the rain grow rivers and streams and creeks to crest?

Now the sky grows slate grey.

Menacing with it's threatening look.

What news shall they bring?

Author's Note

Told ya it was short. Compaired to my other poems, minus the hiku, this is really short.

Reviews

[A]

Shorter poems are often very good poems (well, with some of the stuff that I've read anyway) Each line was strong, and well written. No parts of the poem felt weak compared to other parts, which made it a very good read. Very nice. @@

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like this. A poem does not have to be long to be great. I was wondering perhaps if the word at the end of this line might be a typo? "Or will the rain grow rivers and streams and creeks to cest?"

[Fanciful Goddess]

very nice,very differnt.nice very nice job!

[Cats Eye]

I love the power that it brings with each line, although it is short it brings to it alot of meaning, great write enjoyed this piece of yours