Jūjika

Another poem written like a haiku.

jūjika.

Burdens a wall.

Burdens a chain around a neck.

Burdens the skin.

Showing salvation.

Saving grace.

Ever lasting soul.

A cross.

 

Author's Note

Whadda ya think?

Reviews

[A]

Very nice. :D
I like the way it's written, how it all directs back to the first word.

Or, maybe I'm looking at it wrong. xP

[Fanciful Goddess]

nice very nice. good work!