Hate Me. Love Me

Based from the song 'Hate Me' by Euriell, I used part of one of my stories to create this.

Hate me. Break me. Desecrate me.

Just don't change me.

He grabs my arm as I turn away

I turn to look at his sapphire eyes

Letting them burn me.

Hate me. Break me.

Let me hurt as much as you feel everyday.

Save me. Protect me from the hate of the world.

I whisper as his arms hold me.

My heart races to the drums.

I cry as the world hates me

Maybe. Love me.

His arms lift me off my feet as I fall.

My heart feels cold as I die.

Kiss me and never let me go.

I whisper as I fade away.

Save me. Love me.

Reviews

[Richard Patrick]

The poem is unique, it shows the reader how you feel. Love can be a dark road, you have to journey along ways that is before you find out that you love and he/she loves you. Love is something that must be learned by both parties. You wish for them to be loving as you are. Take your time to find that piece that is there. If he/she cares we may make a mistake and forget something. We are all flawed in some fashion. In the bible there is a statement that no man is perfect. We are all flawed, by being who were are.

I hope love finds you and your heart. Be true to thy heart. You are a mortal, as are all of us. You will find love, maybe when you least expect it.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Oh! That's both, sad and romantic. World is full of hatred and having a person by your side to love you throughout your life is like a blessing- which is becoming rare. Great work. Keep writing.

[Tessah]

Thank you Vatsal