Forgotten

To anyone who has lost a friend lately and feels like they are alone, you are not the only one!

When Im alone what do I think about?

It’s a simple question with a million answers 

As if every little crisis at once is pulling at my mind

Clawing and digging their way through

But one thing sticks out from the rest 

You

A perfect little mistake can make the biggest hole 

Moving it's way into 

Reaching the only thing human left inside of me

That little mistake soon creates a poison 

Killing and changing without a cure

Running through my brain and spilling out my eyes

Causing the human left in me to wilt and dry

When your alone what do you think about?

It’s a simple question with a million answers 

And out of all the answers in the world 

Not one is about me

Reviews

[jcgcorp]

That's not a bad piece. Keep it up Tess

[jcgcorp]

That's not a bad piece. Keep it up Tess

[Nessie_AJ]

Truly captures the struggle of a loss! Love the use of words like 'poison' and 'perfect little mistake.' Really good job!

[Justin]

that was really great :) :) it covers a lot of great points in it :) :) great job :)

[tess]

Thank your for your review, I really do appreciate it! Im glad that you enjoyed my writing and I love all your smily faces!!! (:

[Justin]

your welcome, thanks, i have some material on here u might enjoy :)