A world of colours

A world of colours

A Poem by l'ange de mort
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Our world is a world of colours,

One that is always lovely.

But Man has destroyed that loveliness,

And will make this world forever lonely.

 

Our world is a world of colours,

One that will always be exotic.

But Man has destroyed this exoticality,

And will make this world forever bleak.

 

Our world will turn from a world of colours

To a world without hope.

Man has created this world now.

 

But there is one hope,to return this world back into a world of colours,

Man must scrimp and save,

Because if these actions carry on,

Our world of colours cannot be saved.

Man must stop harming our environment,

and stop being the one that stains our beautiful painting.

 

 

 

Inspired by: Rachelle Lee's 'Paint the world'.

Done by: l'ange de mort 

© 2010 l'ange de mort


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Added on June 18, 2010
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l'ange de mort
l'ange de mort

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