The typewriters tap, with a rat-a-tat-tat, like a fourth estate rap to provide us the pap (that serves as a snack with a rat-a-tat-tat) in a newspaper scrap crammed with meaningless crap from the editor's yap (spewing flimflamy flak, booming rat-a-tat-tat) after gashing a gap in the daily recap with a snip in a snap- sounding thundery clap crackng rat-a-tat-tat and a rat-a-tat-tat.
And the talking heads speak with a rat-a-tat-tat, of the news of the week, tweaking tongue in the cheek (with a click and a clack like a rat-a-tat-tat), thus ignoring critique 'cause they're mild and too meek in the midst of the reek to report of the wrack (except rat-a-tat-tat) whilst the pundits (oblique when protecting the chic of the upper class clique at the top of the peak) chatter rat-a-tat-tat and a rat-a-tat-tat.
The NRA ghouls plug a rat-a-tat-tat while their blood money tools fill the Hill’s vestibules (where deceit behind drapes drips a rat-a-tat-tat), spreading folly that fuels frenzied hands of young fools bringing guns into schools (at the drop of a hat there's a rat-a-tat-tat splashing blood in warm pools) for now anarchy rules (which the hype ridicules 'til the temperature cools) hailing rat-a-tat-tat and a rat-a-tat-tat.
Lawless cops, cutting loose with a rat-a-tat-tat spraying bullets profuse without any excuse (just a split second splat with a rat-a-tat-tat), splay a rattled recluse like a Thanksgiving goose gushing cranberry juice from six slugs in the back (with a rat-a-tat-tat). To redress such abuse, bend the branch of a spruce with a neck in a noose while Death's drums beat diffuse’ rolling rat-a-tat-tat and a rat-a-tat-tat.
War brings freedom to all with a rat-a-tat-tat (well, excluding the thrall with fear, facing the wall [ often smacked with a bat, throbbing rat-a-tat-tat ], until feeling the call to creep out of the kraal biting back with a gall [ with a tit for a tat and a rat-a-tat-tat ], or to mangle and maul if still able to crawl and be part of the brawl in a freak free-for-all, midst a rat-a-tat-tat and a rat-a-tat-tat).
Holy warmongers praise, with a rat-a-tat-tat, any soldier that slays and all rockets that raze (the drones zoom with a vroom and a rat-a-tat-tat) leaving smoky arrays of gray ghosts in the haze cloaking mute cabarets (hushed, the hip and the hop, by the rat-a-tat-tat) while ol’ Cerberus bays with mankind in his gaze, so society prays as it rots and decays (Satan's trumpets of doom blare a rat-a-tat-tat) until one of these days in a flash through the maze mighty mushrooms will blaze with invisible rays, fin’lly braising the craze of the rat-a-tat-tat, and the rat- a- tat- tat.
Your words in this poem paint those sometimes, quite disturbing scenes astonishly well and, with that rat-a-tat-tat and great write, you managed to keep my attention throughout the whole ride which is hard to do with a poem of this length. Bon travail!
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7 Years Ago
Merci!
I'm happy you didn't fall asleep... ;-))
or on the ride, as I mentioned to Luna.. read moreMerci!
I'm happy you didn't fall asleep... ;-))
or on the ride, as I mentioned to Luna, lose your hat-a-tat-a-tat
Over here the gun violence is also on the streets and poorer neighborhoods. Some policemen have been shot also. I am getting to hate listening to the evening news. Valentine Nice write...
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you, Valentine!
You are right... violence (in particular, gun violence) is widespread a.. read moreThank you, Valentine!
You are right... violence (in particular, gun violence) is widespread and seems to be on the increase... from both the 'bad' guys and the 'good' guys...
We can only hope and pray that things improve (massively, and someday soon).
Terry
I love your almost playful way of describing politics and the state of world affairs these days. I read it and laugh, not because of the lack of seriousness of the topic, but because it IS so serious, and how strange it is to me that nothing is being done except rat-at-tat-tattttt
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you, D!
Yes, some things are serious... even more serious due to lack of attention or i.. read moreThank you, D!
Yes, some things are serious... even more serious due to lack of attention or interest...
Anyway, happy you enjoyed!!
Terry
Your words in this poem paint those sometimes, quite disturbing scenes astonishly well and, with that rat-a-tat-tat and great write, you managed to keep my attention throughout the whole ride which is hard to do with a poem of this length. Bon travail!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Merci!
I'm happy you didn't fall asleep... ;-))
or on the ride, as I mentioned to Luna.. read moreMerci!
I'm happy you didn't fall asleep... ;-))
or on the ride, as I mentioned to Luna, lose your hat-a-tat-a-tat
hahahahahaha
That was a fun ride rat a tat tat. It had so many things in it certain facts about schools and guns and how the press works. It was unique nicely done and fun to read. Keep up the good rat a tat tat (work) Lol ;P
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you, Luna! I'm happy the ride was fun... sometime you might have to hold on to your hat-a-tat-.. read moreThank you, Luna! I'm happy the ride was fun... sometime you might have to hold on to your hat-a-tat-tat... ;-)