Weeping Girl

Weeping Girl

A Poem by Terry O'Leary

Your tears do not become your eyes.
Would my guitar weep in their stead
to drench and drown the shade that tries,
and charm a smile when woe has fled,
the fingers of my restless hands
would dance to soothing sarabands.

© 2017 Terry O'Leary


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An excellent piece of flowing poetry. Loved this! Well done! impressive!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terry O'Leary

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Andrew...
You are very kind!!
Its simple yet beautiful. I want to be able to make poems like these for my book openings.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Terry O'Leary

9 Years Ago

Thank you, A.K.!!
Well done! Music can no doubt, bring confort to an acheing soul.

Thank you for sharing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terry O'Leary

9 Years Ago

So very true...
Thank you!
I love the way you write!! it is inspired!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terry O'Leary

9 Years Ago

You flatter...
I enjoy...
Thank you!!!
wow,a great piece terry,loved it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terry O'Leary

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Wordman!!
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you`re welcome
a wonderful offer written beautifully...i thought of Jeff Healey's While My Guitar Gently Weeps as I read this... well-done

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terry O'Leary

9 Years Ago

That you would be reminded of such a beautiful song is very flattering!!! Thanks...
This was incredibly beautiful. Wow.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terry O'Leary

9 Years Ago

Thank you Cherry!!
beautiful! That was awesome!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terry O'Leary

9 Years Ago

Thank you Marcus!
Beautiful and sensitive words.
https://youtu.be/F3RYvO2X0Oo
Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terry O'Leary

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on August 8, 2015
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Terry O'Leary
Terry O'Leary

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