BROKEN MINDED GIRL.

A GIRL IS DEPRESSED AFTER HER BOYFRIEND WENT AFTER ANOTHER.

If only the rain'd stop,
if only the pitter patter
would cease, and give
me quiet and peace.

He's out there some place,
not here with me as he
said he would, promised
after the last meeting,

after the love making,
harsh words after,
heart breaking. I wonder
if he's with her? Can

imagine it, almost see it in
my mind's eye, night mare
fare, the b***h on heat type,
and he like some hound sniffing

her out, sniffing her scent,
the sour faced b***h, hell sent.
He's out there somewhere far
from view doing what he wants,

who he wants, doing what he
wants to do. I wish the rain
would go, bring me some
sunshine, bring me a shallow joy,

a hint of better times, a suggestion
that there's more after him,
more to life, more to look
forward to beyond this heartbreak,

this dark passing time, depressive
dump of a place to dwell. One heart
broken female, broken minded girl.

Reviews

[Akashi]

This is very sad, and I'm sure many people have experienced this feeling. You captured it perfectly, thank you for sharing.

[Terry Collett]

Thank you, Akashi

[Akashi]

You're very welcome