JUDITH KNOWS 1962
A Poem by
Terry Collett
A BOY AND GIRL MEET BY A POND IN THE WOODS IN 1962
Judith knows this part of the woods, knows the trees, birches, beech, field maple, knows the pond where we meet, oval shaped, grass surround where we sit. The water's skin is murky, ripples where dragonflies touch and skim the surface. Ducks swim by gracefully. Marilyn Monroe's dead, Judith says, studying the ducks swim, overdose they reckon. So I heard, I reply, it was on our old white radio on the news. I have a black and white photograph on my wall, but don't tell Judith that; after all she may get jealous of that factor. I like her, I utter expressing a small grief. Judith says, more than me? Anyway she was too old for you, old enough to be your own mother. Not as much as I do you of course, I tell her, and it's true, after all Marilyn occupies a small part of my dreams, boyhood kind; while Judith occupies each moment when she's there and not there. But I don't tell her that; we sit and stare at the pond and ducks, hands touching each other's, she thinking if I'll kiss what to do or to say, I'm thinking of her bra and what it holds so firm, the outline seen through her off white blouse as she turns, and within me something deeply burns.
© 2016 Terry Collett
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Thus is superbly subtle but crescendoing throbbing sensuality, wow.
I truly love it and it is going in my favorites.
Such a depth of understanding you have of life, beauty, and the feminine divine.
Makes you a wonderful, relevant poet, and I imagine a wonderful Romeo as well.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you, softlyfall
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"started humming a song from 1962, ain't it funny how the night moves" (seeger)
so glad Amy reviewed this and it came up on my board....what a poem!
yes, you captured those feelings of that time, and young love so well...thinking of nothing but that person when she is there or not there...
being consumed by her flavor---inside and out.
and love the references to Marilyn...the shock and wonder of her death...and how she was such an idol of sensuality for so many...
great piece...
j.
Posted 8 Years Ago
"started humming a song from 1962, ain't it funny how the night moves" (seeger)
so glad Amy reviewed this and it came up on my board....what a poem!
yes, you captured those feelings of that time, and young love so well...thinking of nothing but that person when she is there or not there...
being consumed by her flavor---inside and out.
and love the references to Marilyn...the shock and wonder of her death...and how she was such an idol of sensuality for so many...
great piece...
j.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, Jacob.
Thus is superbly subtle but crescendoing throbbing sensuality, wow.
I truly love it and it is going in my favorites.
Such a depth of understanding you have of life, beauty, and the feminine divine.
Makes you a wonderful, relevant poet, and I imagine a wonderful Romeo as well.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Thus is superbly subtle but crescendoing throbbing sensuality, wow.
I truly love it and it is going in my favorites.
Such a depth of understanding you have of life, beauty, and the feminine divine.
Makes you a wonderful, relevant poet, and I imagine a wonderful Romeo as well.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, softlyfall
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Terry Collett United Kingdom
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Terry Collett has been writing since 1971 and published on and off since 1972. He has written poems, plays, and short stories. He is married with eight children and eight grandchildren. on January 27t..
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