RED HAIRED DAME.

JOHNNY NOTES THE RED HAIRED DAME IN A CELL PHONE SHOP.

Red haired dame
black roots
dark brown eyes
thin lips

but smiles neat
handles the cell phone
between thin fingers
nails chewed

adding tabs
suggesting networks
that work best
thin tattooed arms

small busted
maybe less expensive
but it's better
she says

Johnny smiles
notes the small stud
in her lower lip
knows her cell phones well

that's for sure
he knows
next to nowt
just to switch

on and off
and send a text or two
and call
now and then

but it's Johnny daughter
who's buying
not he
he's just the onlooker

taking notes
for a poem
just like this
mental note as poets do

to catch the essence
before it takes flight
like some rare moth
into the night.

Reviews

[S.R.M.]

Love the writing style, it feels as if we are inside his head as he notices this woman, hearing his thoughts as they occur. Great work!

[Terry Collett]

Thank you.