I can imagine these thoughts must cross the mind of even the most attentive of husbands, whatever the abilities of their wives.....there is still a sadness though that come through of what might have been... a thoughtful piece which provokes much thought....
The second piece of yours I've read.. and again, amazingly graphic and yet so scantily written. You place words very carefully, like one of those prompt boards nudging the reader to see more than is. Your woman in the chair is somehow magnified, makes your lady-wife smaller.. no, insignificant, poor lady. There's a mind that sees truth but can't help from embroidering it, adding strands, adding colour; your've made your paraplegic dame (why not 'woman?') into the near only character in this.
I can imagine these thoughts must cross the mind of even the most attentive of husbands, whatever the abilities of their wives.....there is still a sadness though that come through of what might have been... a thoughtful piece which provokes much thought....
The way this envelops and just carries through the lines... amazing what one event can do... put all those thoughts in the mind... and still answering the same immediate question not answered... Yet, as I read this ... the whole event came in the end of this write... the thing that was missing is the very void... which caused the event to begin with... all the attributes that his wife did not have... a beautiful sight did... even with all the odds against her and state of being... you've found a treasure to fill the void...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
You are a careful & insightful reader, Glen. Thank you.
Terry Collett has been writing since 1971 and published on and off since 1972. He has written poems, plays, and short stories. He is married with eight children and eight grandchildren. on January 27t.. more..