Emotion

Emotion

A Poem by Triss Chandury
"

A word doodle if you will.

"

 

a
silvery
droplet falls
taking with it
memories as it
traces unseen paths
many before had followed.
.......
the tear slipped down my
face and splashed
onto my open
palm

© 2008 Triss Chandury


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Ooohhh!!! Pretty! ^^ For some reason, it seems like a sort of magical poem! lol Emotions and sparkling tears. :) I love it!

Ironically and Eternally Yours, Blade and Blood (aka Jasmine)

Posted 17 Years Ago


Great job! i love the simplicity of it!
laceyjane

Posted 17 Years Ago


No reviews yet? *gasp* I love this poem!! So simple and yet so wonderful!

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Added on February 19, 2008

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Triss Chandury
Triss Chandury

San Clemente



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I am a 16 year old aspiring author and artist who simply expounds upon her creativity because she finds it interesting and a good way to keep occupied. My writing could be almost called sporadic or do.. more..

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