Chosen path

The way before me is unclear

and uncertain

I never want to go on the path

but I am told to anyway

forced to do what others want

to feel what they feel

to see what they see

but I am not like others

I want to go my own way

not what others want for me

to go on a clear

and certain path

that I choose

Reviews

[Strawberry Evil]

I can totally relate to this, in the current part of my life I am at. Everyone keeps on trying to pull, push, twist, to make decisions based on their desires. But we have to keep on fighting, to find our own path, to leave those who stop us behind.. (not that easy, I know that as well as anyone in this situation) And show them, f*ck you, look at me go, the path I choose on my own, and look at me win in life with what's right for me. Very well written, with a strong mood, good job, thank you for sharing. :)

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this poem speaks so much...................................................................................................................................................................................

[Latoria Sheppard]

I love the message you are giving in this poem. Too many times we fail to follow our own path and we learn to late the path not traveled is the path you create for yourself. I gave you a 89 out of 100 because I would really like for a longer statement. You left me hanging on wanting more. Overall, great poem!

[Hogwarts]

This is a great poem, but in the first three lines you use "path" twice and it doesn't sound as smooth as it could. Maybe you could replace the first line with something like "The way before me is unclear" or replace the third line with something like "I never want to go down that road"
All in all, however, I really enjoyed reading it :)

[Terra Bendite]

Thank you for the help