The mistake

The sound of terror fills the air

horses hooves hit the ground like cannons

bullets fly past

bodies start to pile up

red soaks the ground

nothing here was right

As the fight diles down

people search for survivors

as they step on the blood soaked ground

they see children, innocent people dead

this war was a mistake

that was never going to be forgotten

Reviews

[Hope Rose]

Dude this is really deep. I love this because it's the thought that hits everyone who hears about wars

[Hogwarts]

I love short little poems like this. It was not long, but it packed a huge punch. Very well done. :)