A Child's Dream

" When you cry"

Silently sleeping upon the bed,
A tiny child rests her head,
Yawning for a good nights sleep,
Good as gold with out a peep,
Enchanted dreams fill her head.


Everything is in their bed,
Laying there upon the sheets,
Infinite lands full of sweets,
Zebras gallop across the fields,
Around the world people yield,
Bags full of candy, bunnies, and bears,
Eggs are full of yummy pears,
This is what a child's dream,
Holds deeply upon its beams.
"I'll be there"

Author's Note

A tribute to my daughter.
~Res

Reviews

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Aw, this is so beautifully penned. Such a lovely tribute to your daughter. I was censored by crown court for five years for fighting back against racism towards my daughter. I have many dedication pieces on here, that I think you may well enjoy. Thanks for sharing Resnera. Keep up the great work.

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! Such a cute poem!! :)

[NITHIN PURPLE]

very cute poem...res..i like it so much!! "Good as gold with out a peep" my fav line,may be ur girl thinking about candies and bunnies..omm...lovely poem..00...m envy on me that i can't write this kind of...

[minnie:)]

This is beautiful. Her name is beautiful as well, and so is the poem.:)
These are the kind of things that make me want a child. Just the thought of holding my child in my arms after birth and being there for her through everything. Her first crush, heartbreak, Christmas.
Loved the poem :)

[KeeD]

Sayge Elizabeth that's a beautiful name. Pretty unique from where i'm from.
This is a mothers love. The imagery in this poem makes me dream of having a child and caring for her, sitting by her crib and being there for her.. I want to experience that someday so I can write something for my little one just like this. Very cool, the cutest thing out on the cafe at the moment.

[Holly Mason]

lovely words for your sleeping child-
very sweet
thank you for sharing

[Sami Khalil]

A very good tribute. May she grow in your love and care and be great...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Very nice! Good acrostic, fun images, a child's sweetness poetically presented. Great!

[B-poet]

This is a wonderful and special way to pay homage to your daughter. Very well written, inspiring, and heartfelt. I like how you used the purple text to spell out her name as well. Great write. :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Beautiful tribute. The mind of a child is wonderful. Even when not in dreaming, the world seems a more vibrant and innocent place, but in dreams...the possibilities are endless. Well done.

[Terohime]

Thanks.
~Res

[Emerald Seas]

This is a beautiful tribute, sweet and comforting.

[Terohime]

Thanks
~Res