Can you hear it.

"When you love someone,"

Can you hear it!

That sound.

Is it?

No it can't be.

Yes!

Yes it is the sound of two hearts,
Beating as one in perfect harmony.

It is the sound of lovers,
Never letting go.

Can you hear it?

Can you hear the sound of love,
That lingers in the air.

Around the two who is locked,
Bonded as one entity.

So, can you hear it?

I surely can.
"you never want to let them go. "
Original quote by Resnera

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

A beautiful idea for a write...two hearts that have come into one unified beat. It doesn't happen all that often, but when it does, it is beautiful. I enjoyed the writing, though I would have liked to have seen a little more imagery and personalized description of the "two hearts" and the coming together. Other than that, you are the queen of writing that uplifts the soul.

[minnie:)]

this is good, very nicely written and full of love

[Frieda P]

It's a mere whisper when you're in love, and a shocking boom when it's over. Very elegantly written, great format.

[Pete Langley]

A nice idea, Resnera, prettily said. P.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A pleasant and guided piece, well done, good read.

[C.C. Marx]

Simple but lovely all the same, oozing with sweetness nice work

[Jack...]

Beautiful, the sound of love always carries the sweetest melodies

[Monster ^.^]

Lovely. For maybe a few things, I'd like to make a comment on.

The flow of the first part was great, really, but the question "is it?" was something out of place. Maybe another question to fit that. I don't know, it just doesn't sound right.

And "Beating as one in perfect harmony" is a bit redundant, if not false in its underlying meaning. "harmony" i've searched in the web, means that two things' placement jive with each other. This is contrary to being "one" where they combine into "one". in harmony, two things are still two things that jive.

I hope I made sense, but all in all, great job!

[Charu Charms]

Sweet!

[Russell Munroe]

Yes!

It can be heard with inner ears.

[Robert Michael Miller J..]

I like this, our styles are very different so I enjoy reading your work. Keep up the good work