Can you hear it.

"When you love someone,"

Can you hear it!

That sound.

Is it?

No it can't be.

Yes!

Yes it is the sound of two hearts,
Beating as one in perfect harmony.

It is the sound of lovers,
Never letting go.

Can you hear it?

Can you hear the sound of love,
That lingers in the air.

Around the two who is locked,
Bonded as one entity.

So, can you hear it?

I surely can.
"you never want to let them go. "
Original quote by Resnera

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

A beautiful idea for a write...two hearts that have come into one unified beat. It doesn't happen all that often, but when it does, it is beautiful. I enjoyed the writing, though I would have liked to have seen a little more imagery and personalized description of the "two hearts" and the coming together. Other than that, you are the queen of writing that uplifts the soul.

[Pankaj Lohia]

nicee.. two hearts, one heartbeat :)

[Terohime]

Thanks.
~Res

[B-poet]

Very poignant, eloquent, endearing, and very well written. Great job. :)

[lee von cleef]

?two who is locked ?
May in Kentucky, Gran Tetons, yes the twin spires, bring the gift of four legged flesh,a thousand pounds thundering hearts, heavenly hats ,mint,capped drinks to test the girls high heals, and all I can think of is a Hot Brown from Lexington town.

[PurpleQuartz]

That was beautiful!!! Amazing write!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even if you can't "hear it"----you can "feel it"

thump thump thump thump....

i think of patrick swayze teaching jennifer grey to dance in "Dirty Dancing"

feel the beat and move.

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! This is sooo freaking cute!!! :)

[s y e]

This was sweet and simple. I liked it. Good job

[SHEEMA HUQ]

sure can hear the rythmn my heart in such a situation, nice write

[Mande ThaBoss BabyGauge..]

This isn't my style and I lack understanding for it, however, nicely written!