Free.

"A kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature"

Look at the sky,
tell me what you see.

A beautiful land,
so high and free.

Take my hand and follow me,
I'll take you to the endless sea.

The winds and waves crash endlessly,
upon the land that meets the sea.

I'll take you in my arms so carefully,
And with one kiss we will be free.
 



"to stop speech when words become superfluous."
~Ingrid Bergman

Reviews

[Sunset Girl]

Very nice piece, enjoyed the relationship you painted here.

[Seanh12]

Wow this poem is really good and well thought out, I love it this is truly great and amazing and so beautiful, well done I really enjoyed reading this

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a nice set of manipulations which are wanted indeed, I enjoyed

[Terohime]

Thanks
~Res

[KeeD]

I've been waiting for that "one kiss" my whole life.. I want to feel completely free. Great write.

[Terohime]

Thanks.
~Res

[Silhouette]

Beautiful write, I love it =)

[Terohime]

Thanks for the kind review!

[Silhouette]

You are welcome!

[Rivaxorus]

AMAZING ^w^

[Terohime]

Thanks
~Your friend Res

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lovely work splendid of positive progression, stunning word play and remarkable write.

[Terohime]

Thanks for your review
~Your friend Res

[Neville]

Here we have
A delightful little poem
I might well have missed
Had you not asked me 2B
Your Friend
.
Thank you, Neville

[Terohime]

Thanks for your review
~Your friend Res

[Neville]

My pleasure Res
All Good Things,
Neville

[Dr. Wood ?]

as the sea kisses the shore,

a wonderful metaphor

Lovely poem

[Terohime]

Thanks for your review
~Your friend Res

[Dr. Wood ?]

SO FAST......How wonderful is this electric mail?

[Terohime]

very wonderful. ^^
~Res

[Rita L. Sev]

Simple and sweet - as love should be. Very nice!

[Terohime]

Thanks for the review
~Your friend Res