Boy Lies :(

This is about a boy who just won't be true to a girl

Boy Lies

That boy lied to me about how he felt,

He threw my heart away,

I liked him,

He said the same,

He lied about that,

He lied about everything,

He never liked me ,

He just wanted to be popular

Are all guys jerks,

and  lairs,

Who is really interested in me,

Who won't throw my heart away,

Who actually cares and will take time to talk to me and care for me,

Who loves me,

Young cute guys,

….

Lies to me 24/7

Ignores me,

Eager to hug me for people to look,

Silly of me to think he would like me,

He is in love with my enemy, ]

What a surprise,

I hate how he could ever do this to me,

I thought he was kind,

Sweet,

Nice guy,

Caring,

Loving,

Not a big fat liar,

He broke me into a million pieces,

I have tried to hide it,

…

But it can be hard at sometimes,

People think he's the one hurting,

But i am the one who hurts every night,

Who is dying inside,

Me ,

But i'm holding it in for a  while,

My best friend hasn't even notice how much pain i am in,

I never want to see him again,

Talk To him,

Be next to him,

Hear his name,

He made me cry and hurt,

Why do guys lie so much,

Why can't they be honest

But I loved the way he lied to me for so long,

And i feel for it once again,

I hope more than anything ,

That I never feel this way again,

…

Am so embarrassed how I was acting when he said i liked you,

Never want his name to be heard again,

All i want is ,

Him out of my life for good,

No more questions about him,

No more hearing his name,

No more eye contact,

No more text,

No more caring for each other,

I wonder what was true and what was fake,

He broke me,

Lied to me so many times,

Who has noticed?

No one,

No one at all,

He watches me cry,

He loves watching me get hurt,

He loves watching me cry ,

And break into a million pieces,

All he has ever done is break me,

And when he was doing it he was having fun,

So much fun,

Screw him,

He can leave my life ,

He can leave here with me broken,

And he wouldn't care,

I was crying at lunch,

He saw me ,

He just stood there next to his crush,

Real crush,

And turned around,

Didn't come over and ask if I was okay,

They just don't care anymore,

What guys don't lie.

Maybe one day I will learn,

But for now all I see in myself,

Is Discourage,

Hopeless,

Stupid,

And what is wrong with me,

Falling for a guy who lies,

Boy lies ,

Boy lies

…

I get that now,

And I don't want him in my life,

His my past and I am reaching for my future with boys who don't lie,

Author's Note

I'm sorry its very long but its true ;) Hope you enjoy it and leave a review :) God Bless and thank you

Reviews

[¿]

Many boys do lie but,,,,,,there are some who just care about you..
I wouldn't have said that if I didn't have a boy (space) friend who knows me the best and better than any other friend of mine....
Think if there are breakers then there are healers for must! Take care sweet soul ;)

[Teresa]

Thank You For your kind words, hun,

Much love to you :)
Teresa aka luna

[¿]

You're very welcome! ❤

[barleygirl]

I get the feeling from your authors note that you already know what your poem is all about. This isn’t an attempt to be a disciplined writer. This is about pouring words out on the page, mostly raw, becuz it feels better to get it on the outside, not having it fester on the inside. Sometimes this is the kind of writing that can clear out our creative channels. We can’t write creatively when such stuff is festering in our throat, choking us. So you pour it out in a realistic way, showing us all the different aspects of how bad this feels. The only thing that feels a little incomplete . . . we do not know what happened. You tell a complete story without saying what happened. We mostly know how this experience made you feel, but not what it was all about. Once the pain & disappointment subsides, it can be an interesting comparison to write this experience into a story later on. Tell us what happened. It’s good practice to try to focus on the storyline & not be clouded up by the emotion of a situation. This is just an idea for writing practice someday (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[angel]

Wow; this poem was longer than you've been alive, I'd guess.
You found out that not ALL boys lie, and that's good.
I think we've all been lied to at some point, lies, I mean, in the name of love. I have.

There was a boy in 10th grade who pretended to like me in the hope that I would write his English papers for him.
I would not, and he was gone. No great loss, I see that. Now. Then, I was brokenhearted. I couldn't believe he didn't like me for me.
I had another boyfriend; married, with no plans to divorce his wife. Plus, he was living with ANOTHER girl.
I went in with my eyes wide open, that time.
Same result.
Came the end, and I was left with a broken heart.
Knowing it was going to happen didn't make it hurt less.
Cheer down, though, my dear one.
Tomorrow you may meet another, and perhaps he will be...THE ONE.

[Teresa]

Thank You For Your Kind Words, and feedback I guess, and yes I was lied to for about 4 to 6 months

[Perdition]

Again I have to be honest...it was long and it did read like a diary but you lost me until midway when you said that you loved the way he lied to you. I caught my breath with that and was hoping that "He" was going to wind up being God or a Book or Anything without a face. I read it and yes it was long but so was Howl and I read that as well. I can't give you advice about boys but I can say you have talent and you should use it and learn all that heartache has to offer. In the end you'll be signing your books for them and me. thanks!

[Teresa]

Thank you for those nice words, advice about boys haha, funny, bu thank you God Bless you, how did I lose you when i said "I loved the way he lied to me"
Thanks for feedback
-Teresa aka Luna

[Perdition]

No..that's when you got me..."You lost me "UNTIL" midway when you said...etc. and was my pleasure. And my pleasure. Writing Family ;)

[Teresa]

Ohh yeah writing this made me just think of it and now he is with my old best friend...neither even talk to me anymore :( :) But it made me open my eyes...Writing family Much love :))

[Eve]

I like where you are going with this, however, I feel like you could have split this us into multiple poems. Being left by someone close like that is one of the worst things to have to go through. I think if you split this up by thoughts and ideas then you might be able to really show the pain this person put you through. For example, you could write a poem just about that day in the lunchroom when he saw you upset and just turned away like he didn't really see you. With that said, this has a lot of potential, I can practically feel your passion for words. Although this poem does not show your anger as well as I think it could, I can tell that you do have tons of emotions running through you when you write which I'm guessing is why there are so many ideas in just this one poem because I have the same problem. When writing a poem especially, one of the harder parts of it is concentrating on one thing at a time. It takes a lot of practice and is something I struggle with, but even just writing whatever comes through your mind and then going back, later on, to mess with it can do a lot.
Sorry for the essay, but I just have a lot to say about your piece, which I would like to point out is a great thing because it shows that you're really getting your readers to think about what you're portraying. I'll end it here on a good note, I really look forward to seeing what you come up with next. Keep in touch.

[Teresa]

Thank you so much and Of course I will keep in touch with you :) Thank you for the kind words and your thoughts , I agree with you 100% on everything you said ... God bless
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-Teresa k AKA LUNDA