The Addict

About a drug addict who has hit rock bottom, yet hopes against hope.

I sold my body, the dough was tough,

I had to survive.

I want to rise, I want to ride, just need a helping hand.

 

My souls a fen, I hate myself,

And smoke’s my only solace,

I want to rise, I want to ride, just need a helping hand.

 

The worlds a snub, I lost my faith,

The Gods have died on me,

I want to rise, I want to ride, just need a helping hand.

 

Ten years ago, a rosy hue, the boy had all my dreams,

And then that day I lost it all,

oh, how I wished I’d died,

I want to rise, I want to ride, just need a helping hand.

Reviews

[GreenShoes]

This is quite sad.

Now for the nit-picky stuff.
Should be:
My soul's
The world's

Your refrain does a good job at emphasizing your point.

[Terence Sheque]

Thank you.