You and I:Perfect Couple

The perfect couple,deep in love

When it comes to lovin' couples,
don't we make the perfect pair-
There's romance, love, and laughter
in the friendship that we share.
We care enough to listen,
to trust and understand.
To build a life together,
side by side and hand in hand.
We both know that we're lucky
and we've got a good thing going.
Through ups and downs
and give and take,
our love just keeps on growing...
'Cause I bring out the best in you,
and you the best in me-
I guess it takes the two of us
to make the perfect "we."

Reviews

[Pradnya]

hey this sounds more like a song , a perfect loving romantic song , nice ... actually excellent, keep writing and sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is outstanding. The movement is like music. I like the feel and the story in your words. When it is good. Best hold on tight.
Coyote

[maryjaneuy]

love this. very cute poem. I had a nice read. keep it up!

[Abhinav]

I loved this one
kid,you should write more.................
this was soo sweet and emotional.....

[Dev]

'Cause I bring out the best in you,
and you the best in me-
I guess it takes the two of us
to make the perfect "we."

Aww.. loved this.. Its like the perfect pair anyone wud be majorly J of !! good read !!

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Beautifully done Lovely Sounds like My Spouse and myself Nice when theres beautiful couples out there always ready for ups and downs and there for eachother some thing ones dont think is still around Shivery is dead Romantic love that is But i feel its still alive and Thriving Beautiful Work. You have Inspired me Thank you i been very Poetic Quit alot today. Take Care God bless

[Constance-Outspoken]

That's sweet and well metered poetry there, young man. :) Nicely done.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

beautiful write