Hold

I'd swim a shark infested sea
Have tidal waves wash over me
Hand you my old heart's rusty key
To hold you in my arms

The grand canyon I'd gladly vault
Then walk the san andreas fault
I'd run through razor wire with salt
To hold you in my arms

I'd tear out every tooth and nail
Fight through a violent force ten gale
Then swing a tiger by the tail
To hold you in my arms

I'd take a bullets point blank hit
Go nuclear with an atom split
And clear what's lurking in your pit
To hold you in my arms

I'd take a bomb blast to the face
Search every inch of outer space
To find your happy resting place
And hold you in my arms

Reviews

[Meenakshi Dutta]

How pleasingly and flawlessly you've expressed yourself Tepo.
Ready to hold world in your arms with your words.
Loved it.

Best wishes
Saga

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Told in an almost rythmic song beat. Speaks to the power of one's love for another. Great job, and thank you for sharing your work.

[Tepo]

Thanks very much Carlos
Truly grateful for your review
Ta

[Chris Shaw]

I think I can safely say you are prepared to do anything to hold that person in your arms again. The strength of your love really comes through. I love how you have narrated this poem and the descriptions and imagery you have given your readers. Great flow as well. Good job done here Tepo.

Chris

[Tepo]

Thank you Chris
I very much appreciate your time read and encouragement
Stevie