Imagine

Imagine night without the stars
A jail with windows free of bars
The busy roads deprived of cars
And know how much I miss you

Imagine snow without the flakes
An alleyway without the jakes
A detox free of any shakes
And know how much I miss you

Imagine there's no crescent moon
Of birds or flowers alive in June
The sun not in the sky by noon
And know how much I miss you

Imagine fire without the smoke
A crisp score note without the coke
A punchline searching for it's joke
And know how much I miss you

Imagine life without the pain
Where peace falls on your weary brain
The dreams you have come true again
And know that i am with you

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem is well-crafted with smooth rhyme & rhythm, but most notable are the examples you use to show instead of tell. It's a kaleidoscope of human experience that gives us the ups & downs & everything in between. I think most people don't tell other people enthusiastically enuf that they are missed, as you've done here (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Tepo]

Thank you Margie
Missed you until you got here
Very much appreciate what you see in my write
Ta

[poetgurl]

WOW!! Now this is wonderful, loved the imagery the most

[Tepo]

Thank you Ang
Your review is encouraging and much appreciated