Day away

Just another day away
Just another tear away
Perhaps a wave away
From finding my soul

Just another day away
Another tear away
Wave away
A shot away
From my soul

Liquid sunshine filling the day's
No light on the way

To define myself without breath doesn't seem the way

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

With each new day were faced with a different challenge if we don’t meet to our expectation then we just put it away. That what came to mind when I read this piece it stir those inner feelings I have to confront everyday day. Excellent write.

[deeps]

This is quite a powerful write here. I really enjoyed the first stanza. I like the anology of this write. Very well expressed.