I am the wrong man

The life and times of a man without a reflection

Tell me lie to me

Tell me lie to me

Tell me you'll stay with me

Tell me of the dreams I cannot find

Tell of the life I cant remember

 

I'll tell you of the star I cannot see

I'll tell you of the breeze that I cannot feel

I'll show you the darkness that I hide

Free me from myself and hold me close

 

Tell me Lie to me

Tell me you love me

Tell me Lie to me

Tell me you love me

Tell me youll remember me tonight

 

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Poetry is an art and from this piece I see a self portrait (in my opinion) We as poet have to remember that any write is open to interpretation, for me this poem represent the inner struggles we face each day so I like how you end it with (Tell me you’ll remember me tonight) Again I want to point out its my interpretation, you may be going in a different direction with this, nevertheless I find this to be an excellent piece. Keep on writing.

[J.M]

Fantastically beautiful - good use of repetition and the imagery was excellent.

[deeps]

This is one amazing write here, such poetic words and sefl-expression. I like flow of this.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

the mystery man is back....lol.....great piece of art.....there is an equality in this piece,,,a sense of balqnce yet this balancing does not seem to be enough. There seems to be an inner search that is alive.

regards,
vincent