Cry

This is a poem I wrote.... well to be honest right now. Had some raging emotions and had to let them out. This is rough so tell me what you think

I want to cry
I want to shout
I'm dying to let it all out

I want to live
I don't want to die
why must this world make me cry?

My past haunts me
I want it back
I wish I could be in a pack

I want to die
I want to go home
If only that were a place I could go.

Reviews

This is a beautiful piece. I espically liked the last part where you said, "I want to go home, If only that were a place I could go."