Shoes, Shoes, Shoes

Shoes, Shoes, Shoes

A Poem by Tenisha
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An eccentric description of shoes.

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Shoes, shoes, shoes there are so many to choose.
What doors are you walking into?
Is your mood happy, fun, adventurous, boring, angered, sad or simply plain?
Heels, wedges, sandals, flats, boots, straps, peep-toes, platform how about that?
What message do your feet convey today?
There is no pleasure without a little pain
Ouch, this pair is driving me insane!
Some can be of comfort too
All of your shoes describe the real you.
Composed by: Author Tenisha D. Younger

© 2014 Tenisha


Author's Note

Tenisha
This is a fun piece!

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If the shoe fits wear it...yet this topic has more of a female gender approach...there's a single shoe for every outfit...as a male...I have to admit --- that I had 22 pairs of athletic shoes alone in my younger years...all bought and paid by me...no parents...involved...was fortunate to have a good job as a teenager...always dislike a new pair --- I'm sure everyone would agree...yet when the old ones are needing changed --- you do not want to get rid of them...being it took that long just to get the right feel...and running 60 miles a week...I parted ways with them often...and replaced them just as fast...I wonder if dropping the 1st , 2nd and 3rd line would give this a better feel:

Shoes, shoes, shoes there are so many to choose.
What doors are you walking into?
Is your mood happy, fun, adventurous, boring, angered, sad or simply plain?
Heels, wedges, sandals, flats, boots, straps, peep-toes, platform how about that?
What message do your feet convey today?
There is no pleasure without a little pain
Ouch, this pair is driving me insane!
Some can be of comfort too
All of your shoes describe the real you.

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Shoes, shoes, shoes...
There are so many to choose.
What doors are you walking into?
Is your mood happy, fun, adventurous,
Boring, angered, sad or simply plain?
Heels, wedges, sandals, flats, boots,
Straps, peep-toes, platform how about that?
What message do your feet convey today?
There is no pleasure without a little pain
Ouch, this pair is driving me insane!
Some can be of comfort too
All of your shoes describe the real you.

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gives the the reader time to grasp the questions...
with the emotions and the style of shoe to wear...
like I said if the shoe fits wear it...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your title drew me in, like getting hit over the head with a spiked high heel....gotta love shoes, yes indeed it can say so much about who we are, such a sweet addiction and there is no cure....yay for shoes! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I adore and love shoes!!!!!!!!
That is one of biggest addictions. Lol!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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