Honest

From my heart to yours

Honestly said, 

I really loved you. 

Honestly said,

I hate the woman that you became.

Honestly said,

I did the best I could to make this work...

Honestly said,

I feel you can't say the same.

Honesty should

Have been what was in our heart

Honesty could

have been just where to start

Now honestly spoken, I'm glad you are gone. 

Reviews

[RainQueen]

Incredibly well done! The repetition drives it home, makes your point sing.
This - trying to build on a foundation of sand - a relationship without honesty from the beginning...Succinct and somehow vivid. Thank you.

[Alexis]

I really felt all of the emotions you potrayed here. Perhaps in a slightly different way, I've felt the same way before. Honesty is such an important aspect in any kind of relationship. You did a good job here. I'm sorry if you've had to feel this way before. :(

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Wow that cuts pretty deep , I like this , really to the point and packs a punch ..

[Kat Wildd]

I like & felt it