My first Sonnet

i had an idea to write a poem in the same style as a sonnet.. . with the ababcdcdefefgg scheme so i did...

How to write a sonnet? why not compare to thee?

both filled with elegance and beauty

but while they conqour my mind, your all i see

to think of you both, is my only duty.

Now they all have 14 lines

and they rhyme like ABAB

and it will all come together to define

with metaphors filled of the love i see  

often complex like a couples love

such as the sun light sky

with the heavens above

nothing more beautiful, i cant deny

     my love for a sonnet is challenged by you

     yet yours is sweeter and kinder all through