Friends forever

i often get stuck in the friend zone -.-

My smile just appears

when your in sight

My mionds so confused

but my hearts knows its right

 

can i stop this feeling?

When did it start?

my hearts wants to stop it

and thats tearing me apart .

 

I know your just a friend

and it's hard to understand

but in my dreams we play pretend

that were holding hand in hand.

 

The hurt im feeling now

wont just go over night.

But as you always say

it will all turn out alright

 

The tears are following freely now,

The blood flows freely too

I'll slit my wrists just one more time,

Forgetting all of you.

 

 

Reviews

[Jupiter Jazz]

Wow. Powerful poem. Very emotional and relatable. Good job! Yosh!!



FYI: Ignoring the obvious lack of capitalization and puntuation...
1st stanza, 2nd line, "your" should be "you're"
1st stanza, 3rd line, "mionds'' should be "mind's"
1st stanza, 4th line, "hearts" no "s" necessary
2nd stanza, 3rd line, "hearts" no "s" necessary
3rd stanza, 1st line, "your" should be "you're"
3rd stanza, 4th line, "were" should be "we're"
5th stanza, 1st line, "following" I think you meant "flowing"