46 reasons why

46 (lucky number) reasons why i love my girl , there are so many more, but all these are true and fit into the rhyming scheme

Oh baby trust me when I say, 

I love you more every day. 

Your beautiful hazel eyes 

that make my heart rise.

your cheeky smile 

your bad a*s style 

your button nose 

Your tiny toes,

Your warm embrace 

Your perfect taste

Your softest touch 

You never judge 

Your amazing humour 

forget the rumours,

Your brunette hair 

Your fantastic pair ;)

Your cutest face 

When we race,

watching TV in your arms 

your ability to calm 

your honest laugh 

and even your wrath 

your long legs 

your breath on my neck,

you accent as you speak 

your kiss on my cheek 

your lips on my skin 

when you let me win 

when you pick me up 

when you say sup, 

when you wink 

the way you think 

your gorgeous body 

the way your not cocky 

the way you care 

and when you stare,

you have great solace 

you're completely flawless 

our first date 

you don't think of fate, 

you're the kindest I know 

you're bodies natural glow 

when you lick your lips 

and send me pics .

your look of pleasure 

your love I cannot measure 

the way you miss me 

and what you think of me...

Author's Note

All reviews welcome

Reviews

[BlueberryKisses]

I think this is so sweet, I really like it :) well done! xx

[Chris]

Feeling it, it IS cool - just fyi embrase comes with a "c" - but is your choice. Grammar IS no big thing in many forms of poems, same with punctuation. But both have purpose because poetry is meant to be heard - not just read. Your write has a beat - a rhythm. The tones of the words when spoken has a flow - a smoothness. You as the author can set YOUR choice of beat and its rhythm by where you have the reader do shyt - like pause, breathe, speed up, slow down ...just like in a song being sung. You can set the spoken accent and how the words or their syllables are stressed.

Takes time and effort sometimes and other times it just come natural. Your girl is worth your time and effort ...and so are your readers when they listen to you talking. So ya know - I had speakin in this review beginning with feelin vs feeling and many more. I changed em just so ya wouldn't think I was dinging you and had no clue myself. I prefer to talk with rather than down or at. I know how to spell, it's just sometimes it ain't what we say as much as how we say it - ya know?

Your girl is special, you spoke well.

[Sophles]

My mistakes are mostly because I have ideas for poems, but I mostly just let it roll from my mind to my fingers as I type and I cant automatically put in punctuation and things as I type because I'm just thinking about how I'm saying it and if I stop to figure how to spell things all the words will go, I always plan to go back and correct my work but I normally forget. Anyway thank you for the review.

[Chris]

You write the same way I do... I call it freefall. I seldom - and I mean seldom, ever edit as I write. But there are ways we - both you and I, can help ourselves get better. Really.