The Abyss

My head is spinning as I clench my chest
I can feel myself falling into the dark abyss
My heart contracts a fierce aching pain
the darkness surrounds me as I cry out for help
I close my eyes as I hit the ground in a daze
laying there barely breathing as my dreams fade
There I lay broken,dreamless, soulless
another victim of loves abyss

~Tempest Skye 9.06.09~

Reviews

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Very well done. I feel the depth of your pain. you might like my short story -
" THE EDGE OF THE ABYSS "

[Mo'Kha]

very dramatic...end scene.
blessings,
~M

[Jenny DelVecchio]

Great poem! I love it. They words just flowed so easily through my mind as i read it.