love poetry

when i last wrote;is about two people hwo love each other who have constatly have to handle the mystries of cupids work

WHEN I LAST WROTE

Blind to the book fate and destiny wrote

Wrought in flames of passion my love gushing from the exit wound of my thoughts

I salvaged courage from the carnage of our affair

It was love and hate our feelings at war

You were screaming l was shouting

�"it’s nothing new it’s been done before

-so I thought-

but then l felt your absence even before l reached the door

- I was sore �"

so were you-

I saw that look I’ve seen it before it borders between ’stay no go,stay you fool don’t leave me ,but no go but then lm all alone’

-l saw you bow your head like you where mind reading and deciphering the palm of the floor-

that night l swear l slept on the floor just to hear what the ground said and to feel what you felt when I struggled to reach the door

-now open your heart

�"when lm in shut all doors and close the windows-

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I salvaged courage from the carnage of our affair



It was love and hate our feelings at war



You were screaming l was shouting"

A nice write...I like those lines the most...:)............

[Chirenje]

lm honoured thank you your english flows like small stream to the waterfall of your lovely expressions

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. That is so poetic...Yours too...:)...............

[Chirenje]

so what does oneiros mean

[Sami Khalil]

The god of dreams in Greek mytholody...:)

[Chirenje]

ok interesting

[Sami Khalil]

:).......................