The castle

We were walking more and more into the forest, and she told me all about her life. I found out that she's a vampire. I wasn't scared, maybe little bit. Then she said all about Aron, and the reason why is he like that all the time. 

-You see, before we became vampires, he had fiancee. But, on the day when they were supposed to get married, a group of vampires smelled us. They were passing by the forest, and they smelled our blood. The first one that they killed was Mary, girl that was supposed to get marry with Aron. They turned us to vampires, and they told Aron that they will kill every girl that he falls in love with. And i am the only girl that is safe, every other they will kill.- she finished.

-Did you see them later, i mean vampires?- i asked curiously. 

-No, why?- she was confused.

-Because if they told him that they will kill every girl that is with him, someone has to watch on Aron, right? If they don't, how they supposed to know do he has a girl...- i said.

-You're right. But some vampires have powers. For example, i can read your mind. Aron can controle your body with his mind, and he can do with you whatever he wants.- she said.

-Okay, that's the one i don't want to try...- i smiled.

-Hahaha, don't worry, he use it just to kill on easy way.- she was laughting. 

-Okay, if you say so...- i said and looked infront of us. 

There was huge castle, like really huge. It was all black and its towers were touching the sky. I liked it. It was all mysterious, dark and weird. Anna knocked on the doors. 

-Password?- we heard voice from inside. 

-Come on Max, opet or you will taste my fist...- she was nervous.

-Okay, okay. Just a second...- he unlocked the doors.

-Oh, and this is?- he looked at me. 

-Tea, she's going to live with us.- she said.

-Oooh, so thats the reason why Aron came so mad home...- he said. 

-Look, i don't want to make problems okay? I can find house somewere in town...- i said. 

-No, you'll stay here.- Anna said and grab me for waist. 

-Come, i'm going to show you your room...- she was going to the stairs. 

-O-okay.- i was following her. 

We were walking 5 minutes, and then i said huge hall with just two rooms.

-Listen, there is just one free room, and its right next to Aron's room. So just please, don't be...umm...- she stopped.

-Annoying?- i asked.

-Yes. Go check your room, i'm going to see can i find you something for eat.- she was gone in one second.

I walked in one room. It was huge. There was one big bed in the middle. Window was turned to wood and it had beautiful look. Someone walked in the room. I thought it was Anna. But it wasn't.

-What are you doing in MY room?- Aron asked angry.

-I-i'm sorry, i thought it's mine. Sorry.- i said. 

-Get lost, now.- he said.

I was rushing to the doors. When i passed next to him, i saw his eyes. They were red as blood, even more. I opened the door and entered the hallway. I opened the doors of other room, who was huge like Aron's. I throw myself on the bed. I was tired. Slowly, i fell asleep.

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Putting grammar aside, the story is quite enjoyable so far. Aron seems like a cool character, though it makes me wonder why he was so rude towards Tea when she came into his room. It will be nice to read a bit more about him in the future. :D

[Tea Boo]

Well, keep reading and you will find out ;) Or just go see your inbox on facebook xD