The beggining

Finally, that day comed. I was arleady packed and i woke up early in the morning. I was looking did i forgot something, when my dad called me.

-Tea, where are you? I have something for you...- he said.

-Here i am dad, upstairs...- i said in all that mess in my room.

-Ah, there you are honey. Here, i bought you something...- he walked in.

-What?- i looked at him.

-Here...- he said and gave me a little box.

-What's that?- i asked curiously. 

-Open and you will see.- he smiled.

I opened the box and inside there was a little necklace, with a sparkly heart on it. I looked at him, and his eyes were full of tears. I hugged him as strongest i could, and he hugged me back.

-I love you. I gavev this to you so you can remember me by something. I just can't imagine that my little girl is going alone in the world with just sixteen...- he said, and his tears were rushing on his face.

-Don't worry dad, i will be okai, i promise...- now i was crying too, how perfect.

-Okay now, did you packed everything?- he asked.

-Yes, that's all...Can you put this necklace on my neck?- i asked.

-Of course...- he smiled. 

-There. My little princess...just be careful in Seattle, okay?- he looked me in eyes.

-I promise.- i said. 

He drove me to bus station. Now, eight hours of driving to Seattle. I said goodbye and walked in the bus. It was half empty, so i decided to go right to last seat. I fall asleep. I woke up when i hear someone's conversation. 

-Is she sleeping?- someone asked, i think it was a boy.

-No, you moron, she's dead. Of course she's sleeping.- that other answered, obviously girl.

I opened my eyes. Girl and boy were staring at me.

-What? Never seen a girl sleeping?- i was angry. 

-Hahaha, yea, right...- girl smiled. 

-Just waisting my time...- boy turned around.

-What is his problem?- i asked.

-Nah, he's always like that. My name is Anna. Your's?- she asked.

-Tea, nice to meet you.- i answered.

-And that moron over there is my brother, Aron. So you're going to Seattle?- she asked.

-Yeah, how did you know?- i was confused.

-I just guessed. I live there too.- she said.

-Great, i have at least one friend...right?- i looked at her.

-Yes, of course.- she said. 

We went out of the bus, and i started to search for some house, when  Anna said:

-You can live with us! Right Aron?- she looked at him.

-Are you crazy? Of course she can't stay, and you know why...- he said.

-But please! I never had friend...and i promise that he will never tell our secret...- she was begging.

-Okay, but if she does, i swear, she will become my breakfast.- he said and dissapear. 

-Breakfast?- i was scared.

-Listen carefully...now i'm going to tell you a little secret, but you can't tell it to nobody, understand?- she said, and we started to walk to dark forest.

Author's Note

And again, sorry for grammar problems xD I just don't care for it :') My first english book, that's the reason c:

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I personally don't mind grammar mistakes, but some people may find it hard to fully enjoy the story because of them. Oh, and there are some tense inconsistencies too. As for the story itself, it seems good so far, I like the fact that there isn't much revealed about the main plot, as it will allow the story to realistically develop itself over time.
Kepp writing. :)

[Tea Boo]

Hahaha, thanks, well i hope they will understand that this is my first story on english...And i hope they will like it (: