Magic

Contest entry

After Kate died... it was the last time I believed in magic, in love... or in the existence of God.

Reviews

[Tobias H. Reese]

I remember this line from one of your works (don't I?) Hmm. I'll have to check my library to see if I've saved it to recall the title.
Superb. As always.
Btw, I'm looking specifically for short scripts to produce as one minute films. (
Fleshed out with screenplay, actor, music...the works. I'm looking for "pg" ...maybe pg13 works only
which can be manageable on a shoe-string budget aka none. :-)
I have examples of my work...can't recall if you've seen them though.
Search "Cartography" Chasing Venus Arts or Chasing Venus Film Arts on YouTube/google/instagram.
Peace!

[Tegon Maus]

Yes Tobias... it is the last line from another story. This line was part of a 1 sentence contest. If any of my work can help you let me know I would be happy to help.

[Mr_M]

This is the beauty of such short stories. Many people would write pages and pages of material and not arrive at such an epic and stunning story. I loved it.

[Ray]

One line can sure say a lot : that's the beauty of writing, of literature, black ink on paper : you can give so many feelings and interpretations in only one simple sentence. There's so many meanings to this. It's just plain beautiful.

[Michael X]

Depthfully envisioned supposition, some memories act as hauntings
of a belief that is no longer vaild to one's existence, I like how you've
expresseed this setting in detail and conviction, great work here.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Short and sweet!

[Ice Girl]

Simple line, even though it's perfect!

[Archia]

Ohhh, that's so, so, just so something (a really good something). I loved it.