A Work of Art

A Work of Art

A Poem by Teeya
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When the idea fades into the reality

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Lines of colorless spaces

leaves the picture incomplete
Hues of my complexion are used
to masque the drabness
of desolate gray 
You admire the beauty of 
this masterpiece and
for a moment
find comfort
in its newness
forgetting 
the portrait was
painted on a
canvas of your
deeply 
etched scars
The consolate
impression of 
your love for me
fades
into a reality 
where I'm standing
in the shadow
of the one you 
wish were standing 
here instead

© 2014 Teeya


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A beautifully worded and thoughtful poem, cleverly written to explain how the harsh reality always remains no matter how much we try and hide it with beauty instead.. I enjoyed this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Teeya

11 Years Ago

I appreciate you taking your time to read and for the lovely comment

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Added on October 8, 2013
Last Updated on June 14, 2014
Tags: Heartbreak, Sadness, Regret

Author

Teeya
Teeya

Atlanta, GA



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