Penguins

Here is a Haiku I wrote:

Fast black and white flash,

waddling slides by and away,

cold playful water bird.

Author's Note

What do ya think?

Reviews

[KisuKimmi]

ahh...tis a haiku, is it not?

very very genius....very.....

[Drew Wade]

5, 7, 6? Nice other than that.