Background

My 2nd attempt at a Tetractys poem!

It’s
funny
what you see
when you look past
the person on the face book picture and
really pay attention to the background
you realize
so much more
going
on

Author's Note

It's supposed to be:
line 1 - 1 syllable
line 2 - 2 syllables
line 3 - 3 syllables
line 4 - 4 syllables
line 5 - 10 syllables

And then I've reversed that. Can you proof read it, make sure it's correct? Thanxx in advance for all the corrections and reviews!!

THANXX FOR ALL THE INPUT!! I corrected the syllable count. Thanx =^-^=

Reviews

[Mioki]

It seems like you have all the syllables correct, and I don't see any grammer or spelling mistakes.

On the piece's content, it really interest me. It's something most people don't even think about. Nowadays people have online friends, but sometimes they are only two dimensional to them. We let these people become the picture they post for the world to see, and that leaves us forgetting the fact that they're human also.

Your piece brings attention to the issue of how humans see each other. I really do appreciate this piece, thank you for sharing your work.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Line 2 - 2 syllables

You have:

"It's
so funny" (3 syllables)

Third time is a charm! :)

Good luck.

Linda Marie

[Daydreamer54]

It;s a nice short poem. Isee nothing wrong with it. Keep up the good wirk! Brw, I love thepicture! :)

[Aleah]

I completely agree

[KaySea]

very very true